Last year Slim entered 2 haikus in the Mountmellick Haiku Festival. He finished 9th and 10th in the non-starter category. See blog post “Poet’s Corner 2”.
Since then he has learnt how to count syllables and has made some revisions.
Let’s not dwell on what might have been.
pink cherry blossoms
resting on a red car hood
petal to metal.
San Diego Zoo
a large baboon bends over
it’s late afternoon.