That Poetic Hum
that poetic hum
that poetic drone
your ear always on the alert
for that cadence in the every day
that unconscious internal rhyme
there’s a barber shop on Dunbar Street
or that line that requires a non sequitur
she was a woman before her time
and you say
in a town lost to time
to everyone’s irritation
then when you find that seed
that germ of a poem
you are lost to all around
family, colleagues, friends
your head in the clouds
and when you poke your head through
the accumulated cumulus
you come face to face
with another poet who says
that last line’s a bugger, eh?
and you say
it most certainly is
it most certainly is.
Over at dVerse, Gina’s challenge is to write a poem around the notion that the poetic mind never turns off, that it’s always there in the background as we engage with the every day. Check out her excellent post here.
I can relate to this so much!
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Glad you liked it!
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You make me sit up and listen more now after reading this song dance of your poetic inspiration. So much I like about this from the opening lines to the italicised song lyrics (they seemed that way to me!). This is exactly how I imagine a drone should be like and your described it eloquently with your special brand of humour I so enjoy. We all need another poet to bring us back to reality…lol! Well done and I can’t stop coming back to read this over again. Thank you participating in the prompt.
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Thanks Gina, a great prompt, poem would not exist without it!
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I like the thought of finding that other poet up there in the clouds.
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Thanks Frank!
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I am always in a look out for finding that seed
that germ of a poem.
I really like you are lost with lines, your head in the clouds. See you there!
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Thanks Grace!
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Ha! Cool. It most certainly is.
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Thank you!
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Great description of your creative process!
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Thanks Eilene!
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BTW do you have a story behind the name of your blog, Jim?
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Believe it or not, I woke from a dream and the phrase was in my head!
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As good a reason as any!
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Bravo! Bravo! You have captured the poet’s mind exactly.
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Thanks VJ!
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Very welcome, Jim.
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Such a wonderful expression of the joy, release, obsession, and challenge of being a poet, in the act of creating. Excellent Jim! Loved it…
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Thanks Rob, much appreciated!
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This made me smile. I love it!
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Thanks Beverly, much appreciated!
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That’s just how it is! Those poetic seeds floating on the air and taking root in the imagination. I seem to pick them up everywhere, like dandelion fluff – what I believed were fairies when I was a child. Perhaps they are. I love the poet in the clouds in the final lines, Jim! The last line is often a bugger!
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Thanks Kim! I like the dandelion fluff analogy!
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Fantastic!
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That recognition by another poet, whether in one’s own words or the search for words, is a reward.
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Indeed it is, there are not a lot of us around!
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Enjoyed this authentically light-hearted view of poet (with head in clouds). 😀
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Thank you Lynn!
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I agree… we do try to find those words, but sometimes is like sieving water to drink
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That’s a good analogy, Bjorn!
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I believe you captured exactly what we all do.
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Thank you…that means a lot!
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