A Crisis of Confidence
and Slim’s self esteem
condensed, fogged the window pane
trickled to the sill
and dried to a light brown stain
in the shape of Sicily.
Taking part in Open Link Night over at dVerse
A Crisis of Confidence
and Slim’s self esteem
condensed, fogged the window pane
trickled to the sill
and dried to a light brown stain
in the shape of Sicily.
Taking part in Open Link Night over at dVerse
I really like this. It’s such a small event, but your word choices are so good.
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Thanks Sarah!
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Nice description of lost self esteem as fog trickling on a window pane.
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Thanks Frank!
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Fantastic! One watched as it seeped out of him.
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Thanks Petru, much appreciated!
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Well condensed and crafted – with a surprise at the end. I like your style very much.
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Thanks Laura!
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what wonder… that end is wonderful (even if it might be a Rorschach test)
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Thanks Bjorn!
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LOL Wonderful!
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Thanks Christine!
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There’s dark humour here, but you’ve described a loss of morale very well.
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thank you!
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