April – Month of Slim 1 (2 poems)

Yes, as promised, April  just got a bit crueler. In response to Slim’s recent complaints about being ignored, we kick off with 2 poems – a slimverse and a slimverse lite (12 syllables, 4 lines, 3 syllables per line, utilizing only 6 letters).

Names (a slimverse)

those that can

stand alone

those that can’t



(Inspired by Cameron Borthwick-Jackson and Alex Oxlade-Chamberlaine )


Too Many Questions (a slimverse lite)

 U is at?

Is u at?

At issue?

Is it u?

1 thought on “April – Month of Slim 1 (2 poems)

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