Orange Peel
While lunching on rice and beans
I became aware of
the orange on my table
its thingness
its facticity
its outer skin
both verb and noun
but not noun
until it is verbed.
so I verbed it
and discarded the noun
without tasting it
on the grounds
that I don’t find
its taste appealing
or, to paraphrase,
its taste
does not
appeal to me.
Bjorn’s prompt over at dverse is all about verbing nouns
I like the conversational tone to this. It’s like we’re in the room with you. Clever twist on the prompt.
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Thanks Glenn!
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Love this take on the prompt. It’s fantastic!
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Thanks Lucy!
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Engaging write Jim…
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Thanks Rob!
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Well, Jim, you oranged us quite nicely!.
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The big question is what rhymes with it?
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that is indeed the question!
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Exactly… an orange has not released its juices until you orange it…
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Great prompt, Bjorn, lots of fun
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I like facticity. I like thingness. I know them.
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II enjoyed where verbing took you, Jim, and I agree with Glenn about the conversational tone. I love ‘thingness’ and ‘facticity’, and the lines:
‘so I verbed it
and discarded the noun
without tasting it
on the grounds
that I don’t find
its taste appealing’.
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Thanks Kim!
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This is wonderful, giggling right now.
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Thank you, Helen
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Clever.
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