Sometimes a song lyric doesn’t look good on paper, so I’ll start with the song.
Here’s a sample of the lyric
The sun beats down like judgement
on the armour-plated road
I just called out God and the Devil
and neither of them showed,
and there’s a sour smell of whiskey sweat
on the air-conditioned air
sometimes I think I care too much
and sometimes I just don’t care……
and it’s not where you’re going
it’s what you left behind
there aint’ a colour out there
that could describe my state of mind
That’s John Mitchell on vocals, guitar and that’s his daughter Nikki on drums and background vocals. It’s part of a CD we made together, a little while back , (Crossing Lines , The Mitchell Feeney Project). I wrote the lyrics and John did everything else! It’s a dark lyric, I guess. Around the time I wrote it, a close friend of mine had recently died and also I was listening to a lot of Tom Waits and The Eagles. So it kind of morphed into a lyric, then with John’s input and some revisions it became ” The Road”!
Here’s a live version with John and Nikki.
Taking part in OpenLink over at dverse.
greatly enjoyed the song ~
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Thanks M!
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Wow, this is so good, the sun beating down like judgement…. really have that road feeling in it.
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Thank you Bjorn! Much appreciated!
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oh, see now, i think the words stand on their own. however, i never pass on a chance to listen to joni mitchell.
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wait! … that’s NOT joni mitchell. (i’m laughing so hard at myself right now). but i liked john too. ❤
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Ha, thanks Ren!
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I love this Jim!!!
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Thanks Kim, much appreciated.
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Excellent lyrics, Jim, and I like the tune, too!
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Thanks Eilene!
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A very cool collaboration of poetry and music! Love the last stanza. I love your song. Very well done.
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Thanks Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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