
Getsemani
In the afternoons, in Parque del Centario
turkey vultures soar on the updrafts
parrots and monkeys hang out in the trees
a malevolent iguana roams.
This where the slaves came in from Africa
and the gold left for Spain.
San Pedro Claver ministered to the slaves
gave them sanctuary and religion
protected them from the Spanish,
when he could,
so it’s not all bad news.
Pope John Paul Two visited Cartagena in 1986
and apologized for the Inquisition.
There’s a statue of him in one of the squares.
It’s not a Botero.
In the back of a restaurant
in Getsemani,
a girl with magenta hair
is singing “Losing my Religion”,
the lines the singer sings
cross the room
like planes in a cubist painting.
That’s Slim in the corner.
He lost his religion some time ago,
he thought the punishment
for impure actions, impure thoughts
was excessive, at a time when
he was all impure actions, impure thoughts.
He imagined going down to hell
and meeting Adolf Hitler
who would say to him:
What are you in for?
And he’d reply;
Impure actions, impure thoughts.
And he knew, he just knew
that Adolf would scoff.
Taking part in Open Link over at dverse
Image is photo of Graffiti, in Getsemani, Cartagena, Colombia.
So good.
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beat. down. love how you used the R.E.M. song in here
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Thanks Lisa! Much appreciated!
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You’re welcome, JIM.
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Amazing riffing on the REM song, Jim, and I love the way you set the scene in the opening stanza, which reminded me of paintings by Henri Rousseau – and then you surprised me with these lines:
‘the lines the singer sings
cross the room
like planes in a cubist painting’.
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Thank you Kim!
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You’re most welcome, Jim.
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From turkey vultures, parrotts, monkeys and malevolent iguanas to stanzas that each reflect on religion in a different way. Fascinating progression.
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One of your best! Love the end- and it’s great to meet Slim again.
I’ve always felt that many REM songs are essentially cubist.
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Thanks Kim, much appreciated! Michael Stipe is in some ways underrated as a song writer…when he’s good he’s very good!
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Yes indeed!
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Thank you Lillian! Much appreciated!
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Fantastically written. 👏
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Thank you! Much appreciated!
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Love the humor, the REM reference, the cubist planes and meeting Adolf Hitler.
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Thank you Colleen!
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So much love in this poem that seems to me surreal. What a gallery you paint.
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Thanks Bjorn!
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This is an amazing write!
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Thank you!
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