7 thoughts on “Haiku and Poem written in a pub somewhere in Kitsilano”

1. Eilene Lyon November 23, 2018 at 5:50 pm

   Good thing the frog isn’t down very deep! Maybe he/she can hop out. 😏

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   1. sdtp33 Post authorNovember 25, 2018 at 4:00 pm

      There’s always hop(e)!

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2. jillys2016 November 25, 2018 at 7:44 am

   Existential and worth revisiting after the second glass of wine under a dark sky.

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   1. sdtp33 Post authorNovember 25, 2018 at 4:01 pm

      Thanks, Jilly!

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3. Charley November 25, 2018 at 2:37 pm

   Excellent haiku! Love the perspective in the micro-poem.

   I imagine another painting: John at the piano with Yoko deconstructing him.

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   1. sdtp33 Post authorNovember 25, 2018 at 3:59 pm

      Thanks Charley…like your suggestion for the painting…who’s going to deconstruct Yoko?

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      1. Charley November 25, 2018 at 5:33 pm

         Anyone whoever has read her poetry or listened to her recordings… er, singing.

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