6 thoughts on “A Slow Day (Tanka 2)”

1. Eilene Lyon July 9, 2019 at 5:39 pm

   Did they meet speeding cars when they crossed the road?

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   1. sdtp33 Post authorJuly 14, 2019 at 4:06 pm

      I counted them before they were hatched!

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2. Steve Simpson July 12, 2019 at 6:33 pm

   I do like the enjoyable mellow mood suffusing these pieces, Jim. Nothing is imminent, even though it is too cold here for beer. I had a fleeting concern about the white gas, possibly related to radon (I’m reading backwards … posts not words), but as I continued, I let it be. PS I have to mention the gorgeous sound of Hornby Island.

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   1. sdtp33 Post authorJuly 14, 2019 at 4:21 pm

      Thanks Steve! I posted a reply in haiku form!

      Haiku written in response to a comment by the incomparable Steve Simpson.

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      1. Steve Simpson July 21, 2019 at 4:33 am

         So you did, Jim, and thank you for the thought and the praise. I will go there now myself, travelling in the virtual world of internet…

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