That Smell from the Fridge (tanka)

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That Smell from the Fridge

that smell from the fridge
yes, it was the Camembert
noisome, and then some

wet dog, feet sweat, camel’s breath
a toilet door opening.

2 thoughts on “That Smell from the Fridge (tanka)”

V.J. Knutson December 24, 2019 at 12:51 pm

Smells like a “wet dog” is my adult children’s favourite complaint of food they don’t like. Fun poem. Holiday best, Jim.

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1. sdtp33 Post authorDecember 24, 2019 at 6:12 pm
  
  Thanks Vj and all the best to you!
  
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