Low Fog on English Bay

 

Low Fog on English Bay

inversion,

arse over

tit, warm air

hits cold. Fog.

 

A return to the frugality of 12 syllable slimverse after the relative extravagance of the haiku.

Note: “arse over tit” is a common phrase in the U.K., I could have been more polite and used  “topsy, turvy” but I would have missed out on a rhyme.

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