Elements/ First Winter in the New Car (haiku plus a slimverse plus a bonus poem)

 

Elements

 

 

 

First Winter in the New Car

wheel well icicles
rear screen wiper on thin ice
seat warmer up high

arse-scorching
high, so that
is what that
switch is for.

A haiku and a slimverse together for the first time – 29 syllable madness. A terrible beauty is born.

Now, a poem that died and came back to life.

Elliot

some said he got what he deserved
he was just another ocean liner
looking for an iceberg
but I had to observe, you know,
not all disasters
are waiting to happen.

 

2 thoughts on “Elements/ First Winter in the New Car (haiku plus a slimverse plus a bonus poem)

  1. Steve Simpson

    Very much enjoyed the images and the slim-line car (and the zombie), Playing with random switches is a marvelous thing, and brings to mind my closely related experiences with Japanese ultra-toilets. 😑

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