9 thoughts on “Verse Form Freeway (poem)”

1. Eilene Lyon November 7, 2019 at 4:48 pm

   Describing your blog today?

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   1. sdtp33 Post authorNovember 8, 2019 at 12:19 pm

      Ha, hadn’t thought of that, Eilene, but you’re right, right down to the abandoned sestina, by the way….all sestinas should be abandoned !

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2. Steve Simpson November 19, 2019 at 11:11 pm

   Very amusing, Jim. I’m laughing now, but by Friday I’ll be wandering that diversified versified desert looking for an iambic beat, a dash of anything that isn’t a stifled scream. Admittedly a journey to the bottle shop might still save me.

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3. revivedwriter November 29, 2019 at 1:13 pm

   This is an enjoyable read.

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   1. sdtp33 Post authorDecember 5, 2019 at 11:13 am

      Thank you!

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4. msjadeli November 29, 2019 at 6:06 pm

   Sounds like flotsam and jetsam in the poetry stream. Refreshing to sip from, despite 🙂

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5. Frank Hubeny November 30, 2019 at 5:05 am

   Nice description: “tarted-up tankas”

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   1. sdtp33 Post authorDecember 5, 2019 at 11:12 am

      Thanks Frank!

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6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) November 30, 2019 at 1:34 pm

   And left on the shore… we sit and watch at the poems discarded at sea.

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