
Autumn Nail Sketch (haiku)
trees leaking colour
like a paint store catalogue
et tu, chlorophyll?
Taking part in Open Link over at OpenLinkNight 416 – September Live | dVerse

Autumn Nail Sketch (haiku)
trees leaking colour
like a paint store catalogue
et tu, chlorophyll?
Taking part in Open Link over at OpenLinkNight 416 – September Live | dVerse
Autumn
The leaves have abandoned
that chlorophyll thing
and are leaking yellows and reds
like a paint store catalogue.
Death (a slimverse)
A God’s voice
roaring: You!
You are not
in control.
Conversation with Slim
Me: Slim, in a previous post “Slim’s Advice Part 2” you said and I quote:
“Avoid Autumn and Death
they’ve been done before
there’s little more to say
on either score.”
Are you being ironic here in a self referential way?
Slim: No.
Me: “Slim, the first poem here is an outtake or revision of a previous poem (Slim’s Advice Part 3), are poems ever really finished?”
Slim:
“Words can be ‘
rearranged
if you just
talk to them.”
Lately, Slim has taken to talking in these 12 syllable bites he calls “slimverse” and I find it irritating and more than a little disturbing. So, as gently as I can, I say to him:
“Slim, that makes absolutely no sense to me, do you not think you are being a tad cryptic, a tad gnomic, if you keep on like this, you are danger of turning into a fucking garden ornament”
We haven’t talked since.
In which, Slim ignores his own advice. See Slim’s Advice Part 2.
A Clear Day in Late October
A clear day in late October
is like a call from the Governor,
a stay of execution.
It is just such a day,
the leaves on the trees bordering the soccer field
have abandoned that chlorophyll thing
and are leaking yellows and reds
like a paint store catalogue;
on the side lines, the soccer dads
bark and pace like chain-linked hounds
like dogs locked in parked cars on a sunny day,
while in the bushes, Thwarted Ambition
waits to join them
on the long journey home.
Photo: Chlorophyll molecule (Chlorophyll-a-3D-vdw, licensed under public domain)